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Realistically though Dr Goose, should a younger person be watching this? I'm almost certain that this type of video is not aimed at a younger audience, but at an older once which can understand the effects of what is happening to the world of today. The video SHOULD be aimed at people who care about the world, and would already have a reasonable amount of knowledge on the topic. If you were to put captions in over these pictures, it would detriment the impact of the statement the video is trying to make.

On the other hand, I agree that the content of the video needed to be examined. Too many irrelevant pictures were included in the video. I also think you could've chosen a second song, or one that lasted for the entire video, as the same song restarting in the middle of the video is a bit tacky.

Otherwise, you did well on the video, but just keep in mind some of those points when you make your next one!