[Zeion]

Kelly was pretty annoyed when Jaczie made her clean the mess..

"argh.. those who cause the damage should do the clean up! fine.. next time I shall clean this mess up and kill everyone... muhahah.." Kelly mumbled sarcastically..

Back in the meeting room, Benji is being attended by a few clerics.. Though being in such bad shape, Jaczie won't excuse him from the meeting meant great importance in the discussion coming up..

"First things first.. i going to schedule a training program for all of you.. pair you up against your weakness.. an example would be Paw and Verdana.. being an anti mage, a swordsman would be a good match up for you.. " Jaczie's voice were crystal clear even though she said these without even facing the people in the room.

"All training will be held in the Time Flow Chamber. For those who never heard of it, it's a chamber that slows time. An hour in the chamber equates to a min outside of it... and that should give u ample time to polish up your skills and weakness before the big battle begin!"

Everyone nodded. Deep in their hearts they know that training gonna be tough but it's much better then going in to the battle unprepared.

"alright with that, everyone head to the board right in front and see who you're paired up with and training will start immediately.. and yes.. NO REST for you Paw.." Jaczie sensed a vibe from Paw's mental conscience knowing she's not very happy bout not getting a break..

"Guards! go check on Kelly and make sure she's ready to supervise these people!" with that, Jaczie left the room leaving the people rushing to the front trying to see who were they paired up against..

"man i wish i can be with Paw!" grumbled Tanahon..

"better luck next time bro! i am paired up with her this time.. maybe i can start dating her before you know it!" Verdana teases Tanahon knowingly that he is dead envy of the match up Verdana got..

"Hey Verdana! Don't go easy on me just because i didn't get a break! I will burn you so bad if you let your guard down.. haha.. i might even burn you before u start yelling fire!" Paw left Verdana puzzled at her words and skipped towards the designated training room..

"HAHA! you gonna get your ass kick this time bro! glad that she's not my match up!" Tanahon slapped Verdana at the back.. "Good luck have fun! HAHAHA" Tanahon quickly exited the room with a well build male welding a pole..

"woe is me....." sighed Verdana who is slowly walking behind his pal...

[Zeion]

As Verdana approach the Time Flow Chamber, he is trying to plan various strategies against his opponent Paw..

"Maybe she might be out of mana right now... i better do a speed attack with 2 daggers.. or should i go sword and anti spell sheild? but wad if she use siphon on me? or she might go easy on me? nah i shouldn't count on considering she really wanna bring the hurt on to Benji.. sigh..." Verdana couldn't come up with the perfect plan..

"Dun worry Verdana! haha.. your thoughts is so loud i can hear it corridors away!" Jaczie suddenly appeared right beside Verdana.. may be he was concentrating so much that he didn't realize Jaczie walked up to him...

"but i dunno what can i do against Paw!" whined Verdana.

"The more you should go head on and learn! find her weakness! catch her mistakes! find a good opening! (ahem.. timing push people! stim pack for the FTW)" adviced Jaczie.

"oke Jac.. i ma try my best.. should i die..."

*slap*

"IF YOU DIE NOW HOW CAN YOU BE PREPARED AT ALL FOR THE BATTLE! where is your courage your confidence?!" Jaczie shouted at Verdana who has a palm over his red cheek..

"i am sorry Jac.. i think i lost myself when i was watching the battle between Benji and Paw.. it tells me i am still a novice.. i am...."

"the son of Glade, one the most powerful leader i know!" interrupted Jaczie " and remember that well! dun tarnish the name your father build and go get some training!"

Upon hearing his father's name and the thought of the glory his father had left, Verdana regained the confidence once again..

"RIGHT! if my father can do it so can i! time to kick Paw's ass!" Verdana walked into the chamber..

"man.. that took him quite a while.. haha.. " Jaczie follows him behind...

[Brultze]

While our heros have begun their training, in a faraway land the 6 evils of aLt had gathered together for an urgent meeting... They were all wearing a cloak which made them all seem indistinguishable from one another to an ordinary bystander, however the 6 of them knew who was who as they had familiarized themselves with the subtle differences which distinguished each other

There was silence for a while, as each of their attendants left the 6 to their business. Immediately after the last attendant has left one of the evils spoke up: Well gentlemen... I, Oxygen, have called this urgent meeting because our spys have found the sons of Glade and Kowi, Verdana and Tanahon.

There was a great uproar at this news as an evil asked hurriedly: Are you sure about this Oxy?

" I am certain Sheepy... This information was brought to me by our best spy. And so i have called you all here to ask you all... What will we do now that our arch-enemies sons have been discovered?"

One of the evils stood up and said firmly: We should strike them now while they are weak!

Oxygen calmly replied: Guc... While i would want nothing more than to kill these boys now we cannot...

Another evil stood up and said questioningly: Why not Oxy? Have you become a coward?

"I am not a coward aaron! We cannot attack for these boys have found their way to metalopolis and even if we launch a full scale attack we will not win for our forces are weakened from the continued fighting." replied Oxygen

" Well then let us get an assassin to kill the boys!" said one of the figures

"An excellent idea Jimdiddy! I second that idea. How about the rest of you?" replied Oxy

There was complete agreement as everyone who had already spoken grunted their agreement while the last of them, AKA YoonYJ, simply nodded his head. Oxygen smiled underneath his cloak as his said: Well then. I will send our our best assassin from the 'crazys'.

Oxygen then called out in behind himself: Have you heard everything?

From the shadows a well build and tall male, dressed in light leather armor, appeared and said: Yes master, I know what needs to be done.

And with that Oxygen nodded his satisfaction as the 6 evils left to attend to other matters. Once the evils had left the assassin smiled to himself and said to no one in particular: Well well well... You better watch yourselves, Verdana and Tanahon. For Tourniquet is coming for you...

[Brultze]

Added a poll to see what everyone thinks of the story so far . From what we know feedback has been good but we still wan more

[Brultze]

Back at Metalopolis, Tanahon and Verdana sat at the canteen wolfing down a well deserved meal after training for 3 hours.

Tanahon with a full mouth said hurriedly: Zo Vernana. Hoz wes traning wit Paw?

Verdana raised his hand to block his face from all the food that Tanahon was spitting at him and said: Tanahon! Pls swallow your food first! I cant understand what you said at all and your spitting food at me!

Tanahon mumbled an apology and replied: Sry bro. Anyway as i was saying, How was training with Paw?

Verdana said: Not bad. We both got a couple of shots at each other. Although her fireball spell nearly burned my hair off! How was your training anyway?

Tanahon laughed then sighed saying: Terrible... The guy im paired up with is one of the best pole wielders around. And he has trained with most of the spell casters here before and so he knows what are signs of me casting a spell, what spell it is and how to counter it!

Verdana laughed heartily at his brother's situation while Tanahon continued: Its not funny... Ive been hit so many times i think that in a couple of hours im gonna be completely blue-blacked!

[Brultze]

Verdana laughed till he starting tearing before finally saying: Sry bro. Im just glad that I did not get that guy. Who is he anyway?

Tanahon although raging at Verdana on the inside replied calmly: I dont know. He would not talk to me. He just attacked whenever he wanted to and i had to defend.

Verdana was about to probe Tanahon for more questions about the man wielding the pole when Jaczie came to their table, smiled and said: From the blue-blacks appearing on Tanahon and Verdana's singed hair it appears that the two of you have trained hard.

Verdana and Tanahon stared at Jaczie for for their horrible practice partners. Jaczie saw the looks on their faces and quickly said: Dont look at me like that. You know that these ppl are the best training partners for you guys right now.

Jaczie turned to Tanahon and continued: Afterall the pole will give your enemy a long range and will hinder your spells and this will teach you how to deal with a pole wielder

She then turned to Verdana and said: While you have not had any REAL fight with a spell caster and this will teach you how to counter one.

Verdana and Tanahon fell silent at Jaczie's words and realised that this is what they NEEDED to do in order to survive the fight against aLt. Jaczie, happy that she had settled Verdana and Tanahon's irritation towards her then said: Anyway you guys wont be going against them again for a while. You will soon be given your own teachers to coach you both in your melee combat, for Verdana, and your magic, for Tanahon.

The two boys immediately lit up while Jaczie continued: But after your training you both should get some rest. But first i think its time for you two to formally be introduced to the other 'rulers' of Metalopolis besides Kelly and I.

[Brultze]

There Zeion that will help you introduce the characters that you have been thinking of adding all along

[Brultze]

Zeion! Pls write soon

[Brultze]

anyone wan to give names to put as characters? I cant think of some and Zeion is busy and cant write :P

[PinkandWhite]

haha zeion is busy training his T.. see u in game tonight =P

[Brultze]

After a month of not writing anything i have decided to TRY and write something :P. Anyway here goes...
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After a short walk, the trio walked into a grand hall with elaborate decorations and paintings. Tanahon and Verdana marveled at the sight and froze where they stood in sheer awe of the hall. Jaczie saw the two boys faces and laughed heartily.

"Not like the small room you last saw the 'rulers' in huh? The council decided to formally meet you boys in a better environment" said Jaczie smiling.

"Its amazing... But why is it that we met the council it was in the other room?" replied Verdana.

"Well... This grand hall is mostly only used for formalities and celebration. While the other room is where all the real major decisions are made, such as those about the upcoming war... Now let us continue, best not to keep the council waiting"

"But shouldn't Paw be here too?" asked Tanahon

"Well... The truth is after the match between Benji and her i thought it best that she rested... Afterall, she already as met the council." replied Jaczie, not taking her eyes off the path in front of her.

As the boys looked away from Jaczie, and looked forward they realised that amongst all the breath-taking decorations they had missed out what stood before them. About 20 steps into the hall began two long rows of knights, fully armored and armed with a spear and shield in each hand, they stood on either side of a long red carpet that led to six small thrones with two large and grand thrones which were raised above the six.

Soon the sight-seeing came to an end as the trio reached the end of the carpet and on the five of the small thrones sat the council(not including Jaczie). While the two boys stopped at the end of the carpet, Jaczie continued on and sat on the final throne, in the middle of the council.

The council, which had not been able to examine the boys carefully before they were pulled to meet Paw, stared at the two boys intensely analyzing the two boys who were to be the savior of the world in this dark time...

None of the council spoke up, until after a few minutes of silent and calm waiting(or in Tanahon and Verdana's case, silent, nerve wracking wait) Jaczie spoke up...

[ToRDeathsFang]

LOL....I don't know whether to laugh or cry...This is so ridiculous/awesome/stupid that....i can't think of an analogy but it really is epic. Good job writers. You should post the end finished product on TeamLiquid. The english is kinda hard to understand but it is really hilarious.

Btw, i'd love to see what other pro's you got lined up to enter the story to piss them off/make them lol/both.


P.S You HAVE to put m00nGladE in it right? You cant leave him out. Also put yourself in, you deserve the credit ; )

[Brultze]

Originally Posted by DeathsFang

P.S You HAVE to put m00nGladE in it right? You cant leave him out. Also put yourself in, you deserve the credit ; )

Glade is in the story already ;p. Hes Verdana's father and with Kowi he defeated nirvAnA. And im not sure about putting myself as a character, and even if i wanted to i dunno where to insert myself into xD

[ToRDeathsFang]

Originally Posted by Brultze

Glade is in the story already ;p. Hes Verdana's father and with Kowi he defeated nirvAnA. And im not sure about putting myself as a character, and even if i wanted to i dunno where to insert myself into xD

O right...i forgot about that...Im that stupid =D
You could possibly put people of nGen like Master and Wild in?

[Brultze]

Originally Posted by DeathsFang

O right...i forgot about that...Im that stupid =D
You could possibly put people of nGen like Master and Wild in?

Lol. im not sure about the characters yet so i may or may not include them(prob will though ). Thx for the suggestions anyway

[Brultze]

lol thx for the support . Ya my story writing format/language is not very good cause well... im still in secondary school . But again thx for the support hope to continue this for quite a while more (although zeion may not write again )

[Aean(:]

It's good, though you should edit in the parts into the original post so it's easier to read :s

[Brultze]

i will do that in the future but for now im gonna keep it as it is

[Zeion]

tze ^^ =) u can be the Master (one of the coucil) of Glade and Kowi.. now it's brought upon u to teach the arts to the kids... =D haha more ideas for u...

[PinkandWhite]

good job!! hehe