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Unread Sun, 6th-Nov-2011, 12:27 AM Who's Who:   BnetId: EU.Nemo #368  Race: Location: Paris, France  Total Posts Made: 752 # 11
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And we're back ladies and gentlemen to see more of me falling about in Starcraft 2. :l

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Latest gameplay all of which are custom games where I'm trying to get back into the swing of macro and just plain getting timings down.

If you notice, I either expand too late, get to greedy, have no army, ain't spending money, forgot upgrades, ain't harassing, not having control of the map or a mix of...well...everything. :l

Any feedback on what I did wrong would...well...be a good kick in the place where the sun doesn't shine on (unless it does, then something is wrong somewhere lol) to what I don't know what I'm already screwing around with.

Thanks and GLHF
ThePandarine, don't put 5 replays. Choose one to be analysed. There's no point in analysing them all and it takes too much time. You're much likelly to make the same general mistakes in every game.


ThePandarine vs iRLProAnnn

League : Practice vs
Map : Metapolis cross position
Length : 23:40
Version 1.4.1

Replay Analysis
  • Opening Rax late gaz expand. On Metal, the natural is not easy to defend against hellions, that's the perfect map to make aggressive reactor hellions into expand instead.
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  • ProAnnn is playing excessively safe and aggressive because you're low leaguer and he don't want to outmacro you too much. Let's say that what a gold / silver would do. A higher league playing would have far less glings in that moment considering you expanded this soon.
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  • 10 minutes, he's taking a third, both your bases are more or less saturated, you have your tech operational, making units. That's the last timing for a late push and expand. A general rule is that vs if you have not make damage before 10 minutes or you have lost. You did not, you lost.
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  • 13:28 : You did not pressure, no timing push before 10, you now have lost. 5 bases vs 2, 63 Workers vs 44, 79 vs 50 army food. You're too far behind. Now the only have to make units and have thousand of resources and larvae to do that, ha can trade and remax at libidum. He just have to deny your 3rd.
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  • Very good army split but so far from his bases, and your 3rd denied, that's not going to help you.
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  • Now you have understood you lost so you make a desperate move.
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  • Back at your base, you're caught out of siege mode but you cannot do anything else now.
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  • And ProAnnn finish you with Broodlords.
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Strong points

  • Very good macro. But as you're not attacking that's quite pointless. That's not Simcity, you have to attack WHILE you macro. The difficulty is multitasking.
  • Very good army placement when you had the time.

What could be improved
  • Harass the . You must pressure him in the begining to disturb his macro and preventing him to drone excessively. There is no other thing that could be said on this game since his macro was so flooding you, you could do nothing to win this game after 13 minutes.


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