ZvZ vs Product
Scouting
12 minutes into the game, you still hadn't scouted any of his tech, or his third, and then took your own third without any knowledge of what your opponent was doing. Sac Overlords, send scouting lings, send changelings, Overseers, whatever. Scout.
Macro
Consider making a macro hatch. At the end of the game when he killed all your mutas, you had 1k/1k banked. That would have easily won the game for you.
ZvT vs Owlah
Scouting Again
You took your third without scouting your opponent again, and had no idea what tech path he was taking. Sacing an OL into a Terran base at around 6-7min usually gives you a good idea what tech path he's going.
Banelings Kill Marines
Ling/Baneling against pure Marine usually goes heavily in the Zerg player's favour. If you come up against opponents who just make Marines, don't be afraid to engage.
ZvZ vs Klint
Lair Timing
You didn't start your Spire until almost two minutes after your Lair was done. Your Lair is means to an end, not the end itself.
Try not to think 'I should get a Lair now', try to think 'I should get a Spire soon, so I should get a Lair now.'
Scouting Again
You know the drill.
Muta Aggression
Be aggressive with your Mutas. You spent money on them, don't leave them just sitting around.
Aggression isn't necessarily killing anything. Pokes and prods forces your opponent to make spores, remake queens, pull his units back, and spend his APM on things he doesn't want to spend it on. Muta harass is all about being an annoying dickhead, not killing your opponent.
Upgrades
I noticed this in this game and the other ZvZ - you were very on the ball with your Muta upgrades. This is awesome. Upgrades are awesome. You are a more awesome person for getting upgrades early and often. Nice work yo.
Summary
IMO, scouting is the biggest hole in your gameplay at the moment. Focus on being aware - aware of the map, aware of where your opponents units are, aware of what tech path he's going, aware of how many bases he has. It doesn't matter if you know what the correct decision is if you don't have any information to base your decision making process on.
GG yo.
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