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Zeion · Fri, 17th-Dec-2010, 3:41 PM

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Originally Posted by Brultze

HAHA LOL. Nice job putting apth and paw in the story zeion

. There is wifi at where I am but I'm typing all this on my iPhone so I may do 1 or 2 lines everyday. But probably only a bit. And I'm sure paw would be happy at your description of her

TY! i got at least the next 10 more people to add in... now trying to add as much side stories so that everyone can see the whole picture.. *we haven't talk bout the evil 6 and the crazies yet~ lol*

Brultze · Fri, 17th-Dec-2010, 4:07 PM

We can make some of the ppl as the 'rulers' of metalopolis. But who are the 10 more you want to add?

Zeion · Fri, 17th-Dec-2010, 4:33 PM

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Originally Posted by Brultze

We can make some of the ppl as the 'rulers' of metalopolis. But who are the 10 more you want to add?

TBA later in the story.. let's not spoil it... =)

Brultze · Sun, 19th-Dec-2010, 12:45 PM

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Originally Posted by Zeion

TBA later in the story.. let's not spoil it... =)

TBA? Oh and btw the last part i wrote was so that you could easily put ppl as the 'rulers'of metalopolis. I was not sure who you wanted as characters so i did not want to do it first, after all everything i have written is all impromtu

while you have some plans and i dont want to ruin them. Anyway i look forward to the next part you write

Zeion · Fri, 17th-Dec-2010, 4:51 PM

A tall robed male entered the tent. His blonde long hair flows behind him like water in a stream. His blue eyes tells signs of deep knowlege.

"Master, here's your frogco with red mushal sause. Please enjoy your meal." Apth bow repectfully as he place the silverwares on HD's table.

"So Apth, facing any problems with the meto fire spell? i heard u burned 30 heares of land!"

"sorry master! i will try harder!" replied Apth with his eyes looking at the floor.

"I want u to be able to burn at least 1000 heares of land within the next 3 days! for i have a quest i need you to undertake!"

HD still stuffing himself with the delicious frogco legs..

"aye aye my master! thank you for not losing faith in me. I shall take my leave."

Apth quickly head out to the open land once again and start training..

"alonfa rasen, reise afs teh onie sumnlom yeou! buern ine yeour mieght ine teh lighet ine ma namje APTH!" shouted the tall handsome apprentice.

molten lava rain down before him! red lighting filled the red sky.. thunder roared louder then any Roasgfasou, a monster capable of leveling mountains with just it's powerful roar.

"sigh.. only 900 heares now.. thank god master didn't hear bout this! i was hoping to suprise him!"

Apth quickly cast another spell which cool the land down and summon the greens. The whole plains is restored once more leaving no sign of any damage down from the previous destructive spell..

Brultze · Fri, 17th-Dec-2010, 7:11 PM

Meanwhile, in metalopolis. Verdana and Tanahon's group had just reached the palace where their fathers had ruled from. The mere sight of the place took the two boys breathe away. The palace was larger than any building in the city, it was at least 30 stories tall and looked to be made of pure marble causing it to look even more magnificent. The palace itself was also surrounded by a 10 meter tall marble wall which seemed almost impenetrable.

Kelly smiled at the boys reaction and said: Impressive isn't it? I'm sure you two did not realize that the stronghold of marble that you saw in the distance was in fact only this building.

Tanahon although amazed by the sight of the place asked: This place is magnificent. But why does it have to be so big and why does it have it's own wall?

Before Kelly could answer Jaczie quickly said: This may seem too much for a palace but this place also had a second purpose which your fathers had designed it for, and that was to be impenetrable so that if we were to be attacked that everyone in the city may be evacuated inside to be protected and it would also be able to store enough food for 10 years, the city's army is also garrisoned here as well. You two think that it is made of marble correct?

The two boys nodded.

Jaczie continued: Well you two are wrong. Kowi had casted a spell so great so that the palace would be immune to every spell there is. Although this caused Kowi to Be unconscious for a week from the sheer power needed for it, it forever ensured that if we were attacked we would not need to worry about a spell killing us all before the fighting even started, this spell just happened to have the side effect of making the palace look like it is made from pure marble.

Tanahon looked at the palace again and could not imagine the power that his father had to cast such a powerful spell. Most mages would have died from the sheer effort of trying to cast the spell and still would not have succeeded! Tanahon realizing the power that his father had left him, clenched his fist hard promising himself that he would do his father proud in the days to come.

Kelly shouted from afar at Tanahon: Hurry up or we might just leave you behide!

Tanahon realising that everyone had already walked ahead of him, ran to catch up knowing that no more time could be lost on sightseeing.

Brultze · Sat, 18th-Dec-2010, 11:37 AM

Hey zeion I hope I did not ruin any of your plans for the story with the last part I wrote

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Zeion · Sat, 18th-Dec-2010, 2:13 PM

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Originally Posted by Brultze

Hey zeion I hope I did not ruin any of your plans for the story with the last part I wrote

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No no!! No worries!! It a great addition.. Just carry on with things happening me metalopolis.. I will add the side story in.. Sorry too.. Today sort of busy.. When get home I will post in more! 

MrNayNay · Sat, 18th-Dec-2010, 3:51 PM

wow that is long... haha

Brultze · Sat, 18th-Dec-2010, 4:17 PM

Lol zeion I will also prob not be able to write too much cause I'm out the whole day and I'm overseas

Brultze · Sun, 19th-Dec-2010, 2:27 AM

Verdana and Tanahon's group arrived at the council's room. The room was not very large and was mostly empty, there was only a long wooden table which had 3 seats on either side of it and two at it's head. Besides the table there was only a large bookshelf which was overflowing with books and maps.

However, none of this interested Verdana and Tanahon in the slightest bit. The only thing the two boys could look at were the 4 young men, seeming to be in their early 20s, who were siting at either side of the table. There were documents scattered all across the table which they they were all inspecting carefully, but when they saw Verdana and Tanahon they all lost interest in the documents and looked towards the two boys, scrutinizing the two of them, and although they all seemed to be in their early 20s their eyes showed great wisdom and strength.

Kelly sat down immediately and looked towards Jaczie, expecting her to say the first words.

"It's good to see you all again after so long. And it's seems like everything has been taken care of while I was gone." said Jaczie in an upbeat tone.

The 4 men looked confused at this young girl, she talked to them as though she was their best friend. But before any of them could say anything Kelly stood up and said: Gentlemen I have returned from our borders and i have found with these two boys our long lost 2nd in command...

PinkandWhite · Tue, 21st-Dec-2010, 3:16 AM

nice story

Brultze · Tue, 21st-Dec-2010, 12:31 PM

Haha lol thx paw

. Hope you like how zeion made you to be. Can't continue the story till zeion writes again though and he's caught up in work

PinkandWhite · Tue, 21st-Dec-2010, 10:56 PM

haha its fine.. i am loving it!

Brultze · Wed, 22nd-Dec-2010, 5:24 PM

The 4 men were not prepared for this news and began to whisper hurriedly to one another. But they all quickly regained their composition and one of them, who was dressed in a long flowing robe which was a tell tale sign of a magician, said: I am Benji, leader of the mage corps of this city, and i must ask as to how we know for sure that this girl is our long lost 2nd in command?

Immediately after hearing this and without hesitation, Jaczie pulled her clothes back just enough so that you could see the 2nd in command mark and said confidently: Does this answer your question Benji?

The mark on Jaczie's back was a large black tattoo which covered her upper back. It was the symbol of the city, a dragon in the middle of 2 crossed swords, with the seal of Glade and Kowi imprinted beside it.

Tanahon however, did not notice this and could only stare at Jaczie's bare skin. When he realised that he was staring, Tanahon immediately turned red with embarrassment and looked away. However, only Verdana had seen this and he thought to himself that he would ask Tanahon about his reaction later.

Upon seeing the symbol, Benji went on his knees and said: Pls forgive me Madam! I just wanted to make sure that what Kelly had said was the truth!

Jaczie pulled her clothes back into their original position, went up to Benji and said: It is alright my friend. It is always better to be safe than sorry, and from now on you will all address me as Jaczie.

Benji quickly returned to his seat as Jaczie continued: But there are more important matters than my return. These 2 boys are the sons of Glade and Kowi and they are what we need with the threat of nirvAnA's return looming upon us.

Brultze · Fri, 24th-Dec-2010, 12:41 AM

zeion... can you write again after christmas? im getting stuck...

Zeion · Fri, 24th-Dec-2010, 2:09 PM

"Kelly, there is a lady who wish to meet the boys. She's in the grand Magestic hall right now. Could u lead them there while I fill our 2nd in command what she has been missing out after all these years" Benji said these with a sense of urgency but Kelly had no idea why. Either way, Kelly led the boys to the hall where they are supposed to be..

The massive marble door open by itself as Kelly approach it.. As it open, a beautiful lady in white smiled back to the trio at the door.

"gosh! U boys are so handsome!" Paw clapped in glee..

"oh dear! Paw.. Let's not start the who is more handsome then who story again!" Kelly shocked her head while recalling the mindless chatter by Paw over Benji and her father's apprentice Apth..

"Nyaa!! I won't! Don't worry Kelly! By the way, I am Paw daughter of the great wizard HD which you boys met 3weeks ago!"

The boys is so puzzled by how could she travel a 3 weeks journey in a blink of an eye and how does she know that they would be in this legendary village where only the chosen ones will know bout it...

Brultze · Fri, 24th-Dec-2010, 2:30 PM

HOORAY!!! YOU WROTE AGAIN!!!

. now i can relax till you write 2 more parts of the story cause i wrote 3

Brultze · Tue, 28th-Dec-2010, 1:21 PM

But before the two boys could ask anything, Paw said: Anyway, we should not waste anymore time. I am here because i know that you two will need help in your fight against Nirvana. And I am a very skilled caster, maybe even better than Benji(she said this proudly)

The minute that Paw had said this, the marble door which Tanahon and Verdana had entered by was blasted open, which made it almost come off its hinges, and through the smoke Benji walked to Paw and angrily said: You think that you are better than me!?! I have been the head of the magicians here for over a decade! Come let us fight on the training grounds to see who is the better magician!

Paw calmly looked at Benji and said: So you were using the heightened hearing spell and eavesdropping on us... But it makes no difference, I accept your challenge! Let us duel now.

And with that Paw and Benji walked quickly to the training grounds, not bothering about anyone else. Kelly looked at the boys and sighed saying: There goes his temper... He really should control it one day, but we should go watch their duel and make sure they dont go too far.

Kelly then turned around to the 3 other men who were in the room with Jaczie and asked: Are you guys coming or what?

The 3 men only shook their heads slightly and went back to briefing Jaczie. Kelly then turned to the boys and signaled that they should follow her as they made their way to Paw and Benji's duel.

Brultze · Wed, 29th-Dec-2010, 1:24 AM

As the boys and Kelly reached the training grounds they saw Benji and Paw standing 10 meters away from each other. There were about 100 ppl, who seemed to have been training until Benji and Paw arrived, watching the 2 magicians. Paw and Benji stared at each other, waiting for one another to show weakness before they attacked... But after 10 minutes of nothing Benji threw his hand at Paw and sent a plasma bolt at her!

Paw quickly dodged the bolt and said mockingly: Is that all the great magician, Benji, has? If so i will win with ease.

This infuriated Benji as he began chanting in a long forgotten language. Paw did not know what Benji was doing but thought that he was vulnerable and shot a lightning bolt at him. Benji payed no attention to Paw's attack as he merely threw a barrier around him.

The lightning bolt ricocheted off the barrier and flew right back at Paw. Paw, caught off guard by this had not time to dodge and took the full blast directly. The lightning bolt exploded when it contacted Paw and she was sent flying backwards into a wall.

Paw however, merely got up and walked back to her original position. Verdana, not knowing anything about magic, asked Tanahon: What just happened?!? Shouldnt she be down?

Tanahon, without taking his eyes off the duel replied: Although she did not have time to dodge she managed to throw up a barrier just in time before the lightning hit her.

Suddenly Benji stopped chanting smiled smugly and said: The preparations have been completed, now is my turn to attack.