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Unread Fri, 9th-Dec-2011, 6:06 PM Who's Who:   BnetId: BaronByrnsy.518  Race: Clan: FaDe  Location: Perth, Australia  Total Posts Made: 347 # 1
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Hey guys.. this is my first replay ive uploaded...
I've been having loads of trouble against terran lately and I played this guy twice in a row and lost really badly... i ended up rage quitting at the end... but id like some advice as what i did wrong n stuff

heres the link http://www.sc2sea.com/downloads.php?do=file&id=614
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Unread Mon, 12th-Dec-2011, 6:53 AM Who's Who:   BnetId: EU.Nemo #368  Race: Location: Paris, France  Total Posts Made: 752 # 2
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Hey guys.. this is my first replay ive uploaded...
I've been having loads of trouble against terran lately and I played this guy twice in a row and lost really badly... i ended up rage quitting at the end... but id like some advice as what i did wrong n stuff

heres the link http://www.sc2sea.com/downloads.php?do=file&id=614
Byrnsy vs Corea

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Map : The Shattered Temple
Length : 13:57
Version 1.4.2

Replay Analysis

  • 2:45 : You're building your Core before second pylon ...
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  • 3:11 : Bad supply blocking yourself at 18 ...
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  • 3:48 : You're making a second gaz, still chronoboosting Drones, and still have no units. I begin to have serious doubts on your build. You should make units from that gate, they are useful to gain early map control and begin building an army.
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  • 4:43 : Especially since you're Fast expanding behind your gate, you should have better map control, build units to defend early pressure and you should not take another gas since you will need minerals to add other gates soon and support saturating a second nexus. It is needed only if you're teching. Now you need units, gates, and drones.
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  • 8:02 : You now throw down more gates, A robo, a forge and you have a bunch of sentries to defend. You have scouted a 1-1-1 coming your way.
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  • 9:05 : You're putting down a Colo Bay and making a prism and still not warping many units (2 gates free). You want to be offensive I guess with that Prism though you have to be defensive since you're about to be all-inned. You didn't need that Photon since you already had a obs. You needed immortals, zealots, Stalkers to go with your 6 sentries. The Colossus was too much I think, immortals would have been better vs early tanks.
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  • 10:08 : You're harassing a guy who is on one base, that's non-sense to me, it's easy to defend since his army is in his base and you need all your units to defend his push.
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  • 10:55 : After your Double harass, you're so behind in army that you're dead already.
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  • 12:45: He attacks you and you die because of all the above. Your Colossus is alone and don't have +range yet. That Colo bay, its research were waste of resources. You would have been far better with immortals who counter tanks so well.
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Strong points

  • Wanting to expand, to tech, to harass. That's indeed the keys of victory, but you must coordinate them in time, not make all in the same timing.

What could be improved

  • Scouting or reaction to scouting : Be smarter. If you're on 2 bases and he is one one, then priority is to defend, to make units. The more time pass, the more you're ahead.
  • If you expand soon, don't make gas too soon. For me your build was bad or too sophisticated, meaning you're not using it well enough (if it's a real build) for the moment. You must put down dudes to defend your expo and then tech.
  • You lost first because you teched too much during your expo saturation, in spite of a that was all-inning you obviously. Then you harassed in wrong situation since he didn't expanded.
Now, do you think is so OP or should you simply have done things differently ?
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- EU.Nemo.#368

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