[Melchsee]

Liked some inputs on my current game play and any things i can improve on. I'm a silver league noob btw.

http://www.sc2sea.com/downloads.php?do=file&id=82

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My opponent is in gold league so i was feeling quite pressured as always.
A summary of it was i went for a 1gate 1forge FE as my initial thought was hoping he would rush me with a double gate or 4 gate proxy. But when i scouted first round it was all clear i think i won this game out of luck that he did a 4 robo? i had a rough idea what he was going to build when i saw a mass of cannons at his natural. thats when i started warping in more gateways and pumping immortals out. Didnt expect the voidray cheese and i lost a few stalkers but thankfully it didnt do much damage to my economy.

[Apth]

Originally Posted by Melchsee

http://www.sc2sea.com/downloads.php?do=file&id=82

You won that game pretty convincingly. There wasn't any point in the game I could see where you were on the back foot, or pinned in your base. Your opponent spent too much money on unit producing structures and you punished him for it.

IMO, it's always better to post replays of you losing if you want constructive feedback - the theory being that if you eliminate all the problems making you lose, you won't lose anymore.

If you can, find a replay of you losing. It's hard to criticise your actions if your actions ultimately win you the game.