[HDPhoenix]

Hey Zeion

Love your different style. My critique is that people would read a replay for its gameplay, not for added in lines or quirks, like what you did with multiple quotes. One or two to spice things up is great but you kinda went overboard with it. Also, to lessen your workload, pick just 1 picture every 4-5 mins so if it is a 15 min long game, keep it to 3 pictures and take more about the strategy and what happened till that picture. Makes for a much more interesting read when you develop the picture with words, instead of relying purely on the picture to relay a story.

A good first try! There will be more chances to write in the future. Thanks for your hard work! So many pictures!!!