[TheGentleman]

Originally Posted by Leungy

*TheGentleman: *
I like the concept but feel it's a tad bit busy. If simplified slightly it has high potential for awesomeness.

I thought I might elaborate a little.

+ [Original design] +

In both cases you will notice the small lines removed from either side of the star... I feel they were unnecessary.

In both cases I've cleaned up around the pig, the first way by removing all the mess around the pig and making the lines go straight behind it fully and the second by making the lines part way for the pig more neatly.

I really do like the concept but I do honestly feel it needs to be a bit neater