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Matt93 · Sun, 25th-Aug-2013, 2:56 PM

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Originally Posted by Av.RuineD

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Shut up you watermelon head

FLuX · Sun, 25th-Aug-2013, 3:54 PM

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Originally Posted by Matt93

Shut up you watermelon head

This x1000000000

**ToR.Arnor** · Sun, 25th-Aug-2013, 3:57 PM

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Originally Posted by tribewarfer

i agree its not right to make fun of a culture arnor but i was making fun of a stereotype. It like me saying that Australia is full of people who ware watermelon heads. I hope you understand what i am saying

didnt really come across in the delivery

Also I went and watched the rest of the video, frankly the execution of the joke was rather poor, too long winded, No need to refer to them as American Hunters (twice?) just say two Americans hunting in the woods, one gets shot, his friend calls 911, then boom joke/punchline.

glhf dude

SLCNPezz · Sun, 25th-Aug-2013, 4:20 PM

to be brutally honest you should probably just stop trying

SLCN.CautioN · Sun, 25th-Aug-2013, 4:31 PM

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Originally Posted by SLCNPezz

to be brutally honest you should probably just stop trying

PEW PEW PEW straight to the dreams

VB_WhiplashJC · Sun, 25th-Aug-2013, 4:34 PM

You need to write your own material before you start working on delivery IMO... that way you'll sell it much better. Talk about things that are relevant to you.

ChowMuddha · Sun, 25th-Aug-2013, 4:34 PM

probably not the best forum for constructive feed back especially since this is an sc2 site...
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Fenner · Sun, 25th-Aug-2013, 5:02 PM

Needs a lot of work, seems like you just jumped straight into it without doing any research or watching other youtube comedians to have somewhere to work from.

Watch lots of other good comedians, steal their ideas, steal their production, steal their channel setups... You don't need to learn completely everything yourself, learn from others who have done the basic stuff before you.

tribewarfer · Sun, 25th-Aug-2013, 6:11 PM

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Originally Posted by fray`fenner

Needs a lot of work, seems like you just jumped straight into it without doing any research or watching other youtube comedians to have somewhere to work from.

Watch lots of other good comedians, steal their ideas, steal their production, steal their channel setups... You don't need to learn completely everything yourself, learn from others who have done the basic stuff before you.

yeah i will take this advice i am trying somthing new and wanted feedback thanks from everyone's contribution.

tribewarfer · Sun, 25th-Aug-2013, 6:13 PM

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Originally Posted by ChowMuddha

probably not the best forum for constructive feed back especially since this is an sc2 site...
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this is for bloging dude not sc2

Bash · Sun, 25th-Aug-2013, 6:24 PM

"Epicfailviralvideos" ..... aaaaaaaand i bailed.

RuineD · Sun, 25th-Aug-2013, 7:11 PM

how old are you tribe?

Another · Sun, 25th-Aug-2013, 7:19 PM

first of all... change your youtube name, its really really bad, and if this wasnt posted in sc2sea, i would NEVER have clicked on it.

i only watched the guns video, and it came accross as awkward, and well, it was just a long winded way of telling a two sentence joke. so you need to have some better content, maybe have a 5minute sketch and have multiple punch lines and what not. your delivery was kind of off, you started all serious talking about american gun culture.. just no. its comedy, it should be light hearted, youre allowed to smile, sound interested in what youre talking about, and if possible dont use complex social issues as a starting point.

mGGDaedalus · Sun, 25th-Aug-2013, 7:40 PM

There's a stereotype of Aussie's wearing watermelon heads?

tribewarfer · Sun, 25th-Aug-2013, 7:46 PM

have you not seen the cricket dude