Try to look lively and bright to catch the attention of the viewer and bring energy with your voice (speaking clearly and with gusto), visual appeal is important as well as sound. You used your hands a little bit which is good, but they're out of the shot for most of the time, body language plays a large role in capturing and maintaining an audience.
If you're energetic enough you could even try those cutesy cuts that more well known youtubers use to keep the video flowing and active, although it may take a bit more editing work.
There's a bit to work on but that's good because you know where to improve Apart from this they're some good initial videos (and jokes), keep it up! Work hard and success will definitely come!
you should come up with original material also you should convert to Judaism and if possible become black as that opens up a lot of new jokes. Here is an example of some original material Airline peanuts i only have the topic so far but i am working on some jokes as far as i know it has never been used before. Also social commentary is good for example "Those are my principles. If you don't like them I have others." Groucho Marx
Don't forget to drop in the occasional "What's the deal with airline food"
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Couldnt get through the "Guns" video, try to speak clearly, you need to be able to engage your audience. Also try to fix your posture, back straight head held high, show confidence. Take a look at guys like Chris Rock or Robin Williams on stage (these are some of the more extreme examples) for some tips on how to command an audience. Also try not to make fun of other cultures, Its best to make fun of your own.
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[07-10, 22:00] PiG Unfortunately I'm incredibly lazy so most of my video footage is just me and iaguz in bed
i agree its not right to make fun of a culture arnor but i was making fun of a stereotype. It like me saying that Australia is full of people who ware watermelon heads. I hope you understand what i am saying
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