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I am trying to do comedy
 

Hi guys i have started to do comedy on youtube. Here is the link and leave some constructive comments and that would be nice.

https://www.youtube.com/user/Epicfailviralvideos1

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I think that if you incorporated singing into your future videos that would be beneficial

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Try to look lively and bright to catch the attention of the viewer and bring energy with your voice (speaking clearly and with gusto), visual appeal is important as well as sound. You used your hands a little bit which is good, but they're out of the shot for most of the time, body language plays a large role in capturing and maintaining an audience.

If you're energetic enough you could even try those cutesy cuts that more well known youtubers use to keep the video flowing and active, although it may take a bit more editing work.

There's a bit to work on but that's good because you know where to improve Apart from this they're some good initial videos (and jokes), keep it up! Work hard and success will definitely come!

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10/10 greatest thing i have ever seen

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Do jokes about Matt93

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+1 to this

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you should come up with original material also you should convert to Judaism and if possible become black as that opens up a lot of new jokes. Here is an example of some original material Airline peanuts i only have the topic so far but i am working on some jokes as far as i know it has never been used before. Also social commentary is good for example "Those are my principles. If you don't like them I have others." Groucho Marx

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Good luck with your show mahn. Remember to make fun about your culture is always the best way to make fans.

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Don't forget to drop in the occasional "What's the deal with airline food"

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here is one you can have for free. "These pretzels are making me thirsty."

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No soup for you

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The soup was dry.

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Couldnt get through the "Guns" video, try to speak clearly, you need to be able to engage your audience. Also try to fix your posture, back straight head held high, show confidence. Take a look at guys like Chris Rock or Robin Williams on stage (these are some of the more extreme examples) for some tips on how to command an audience. Also try not to make fun of other cultures, Its best to make fun of your own.

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10/10 i laughed through the whole video.

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i agree its not right to make fun of a culture arnor but i was making fun of a stereotype. It like me saying that Australia is full of people who ware watermelon heads. I hope you understand what i am saying

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^ ????????????????????

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Shut up you watermelon head

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This x1000000000

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didnt really come across in the delivery

Also I went and watched the rest of the video, frankly the execution of the joke was rather poor, too long winded, No need to refer to them as American Hunters (twice?) just say two Americans hunting in the woods, one gets shot, his friend calls 911, then boom joke/punchline.

glhf dude

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to be brutally honest you should probably just stop trying

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PEW PEW PEW straight to the dreams

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You need to write your own material before you start working on delivery IMO... that way you'll sell it much better. Talk about things that are relevant to you.

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probably not the best forum for constructive feed back especially since this is an sc2 site...
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Needs a lot of work, seems like you just jumped straight into it without doing any research or watching other youtube comedians to have somewhere to work from.

Watch lots of other good comedians, steal their ideas, steal their production, steal their channel setups... You don't need to learn completely everything yourself, learn from others who have done the basic stuff before you.

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yeah i will take this advice i am trying somthing new and wanted feedback thanks from everyone's contribution.

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this is for bloging dude not sc2