He's in bronze, his problems are purely about execution. At this level all he needs to do is follow a simple build order (pick ANY of them it doesn't matter) and figure out how to do it for teh first 5-10 mins of play then learn how to do it properly, not missing any scvs or buildings or w/e.
Whatever it is doesn't matter. At bronze people are extremely bad and there's no room for good strategic play when mechanics and fundamentals are the core issue.
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