Perhaps you can attach a replay, so that people can have a look and try to work out what went wrong before they go through your analysis? Also, I'd love to see some more analysis on macro; there's about a 10 minute gap in-between pictures 4 & 5. There seemed to be some problem with his build in-between these times seeing how late the roach hydra viper hit and the amount of bank he had.
Good points, will work on it for next time and yeah should add the replay for sure.
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