[Maynarde]

Hey dude! Got your message and thought I'd reply here

Your game knowledge is great, nothing for me to tell you to improve on there. I watched your whole cast between Happy and Tarra and definitely have some feedback regarding some other things go. Disclaimer; this is all to be taken as constructive, it's said with the genuine intention to help improve your solo casts!

1. Your camera work, try to use the middle mouse button when you want to drag the camera around. Using the side of the screen to move the camera is very jerky and doesn't look good imo.
2. Your mic quality is a little low, and there's some feedback or buzzing in the background, sounds like the levels might not be balanced or the cable might not be grounded properly or something.
3. This was the biggest one for me; you're monotonous. To fix this is easier said than done, but during battles and drops you have the same tone, pacing and excitement level as when you're analysing. Just be aware of this, and draw on your genuine love of the game to bring that intensity for people, they'll really thank you for it!

Again, this is all meant as constructive. I hope to see you cast more in the future and continue to improve!