[TheGentleman]

Originally Posted by Leungy

*TheGentleman: *
I like the concept but feel it's a tad bit busy. If simplified slightly it has high potential for awesomeness.

I thought I might elaborate a little.

+ [Original design] +

In both cases you will notice the small lines removed from either side of the star... I feel they were unnecessary.

In both cases I've cleaned up around the pig, the first way by removing all the mess around the pig and making the lines go straight behind it fully and the second by making the lines part way for the pig more neatly.

I really do like the concept but I do honestly feel it needs to be a bit neater

[Leungy]

Originally Posted by TheGentleman

I thought I might elaborate a little.

In both cases you will notice the small lines removed from either side of the star... I feel they were unnecessary.

In both cases I've cleaned up around the pig, the first way by removing all the mess around the pig and making the lines go straight behind it fully and the second by making the lines part way for the pig more neatly.

I really do like the concept but I do honestly feel it needs to be a bit neater

haha, yeah I sort of rushed it and only really uploaded it up here moment before finishing it 4 hours or so in the making.
I get what you mean. It is a little messy, as i was trying to take as much from the GM logo as possible.
So i spent a little while fixing it up, though its not fully perfect yet. Might have to redo is from scratch.
also a few updates to the rest of t-shirt, making the Tt logo smaller and removing it from the back. a few other version I have in mind such as:
having the GM PiG on both sides of the t-shirts. Moving the Tt Dragon to the top and smaller or to one of the sleeves, also i am unsure whether to keep Jared's name on the on the front or not.

Would love to have a version that only has the GM PiG logo :P
Are we allowed multiple entires? I could pump a several out lol.

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