OP in order to get out of bronze league you are going to need to improve ten-fold in all your mechanics, game knowledge and memory power. If you can't afford the GM manual then perhaps this might help then. http://www.teamliquid.net/forum/view...opic_id=208343
It goes over the basics and shows you how you can improve your mechanics, macro and micro. The pdf is a bit of a read, so have a look at it and go at your own pace. Best of luck in your gaming and quest to break out of bronze.
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